Just a poem I wanted to share

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Joined in 2008
March 30, 2008, 19:55

Im not ready to share my story just yet but i wanted to share this poem


I can feel the pain inside ripping at my heart

If only I could reverse the hurt to begin again from the start

I killed a love and lost a friend what could be worse

We remain in the quiet now in our tiny world

Just the tapping of the keys is the only sound I hear

Its just hard to move on when you make the mistakes you make

Bleeding from the inside you find it difficult to move on

Is there any hope of repair is it to late to forgive

Has the hurt that kills brakes steels all that is good

To reverse this state of heartache is not an easy task

I bleed ,I cry, I hate, I sigh when will it ever end

Well what Is love does anyone really know?

It is a feeling or an action do you choose to take it on?

As the blackness drips from that question

My soul has been removed , cant feel the warmth of loyalty

That an animal often gives, they live and love and always forgive.

Joined in 2006
March 30, 2008, 20:01

Thankyou for sharing your poem. It is quite a deep one.

Joined in 2008
March 31, 2008, 01:59

wow. That was a really intense poem!! Its good to let out your emotions like that. Expressing how you feel, laying it all out. I know I have felt like that at times. Im sure we all have. I hope that you will find a sense of unconditional love and hope here that will fill that empty void from which the words of that poem came. Thank you for sharing such an intimate piece of yourself with all of us. I thought it was beautiful.

Anthony Venn-Brown
Joined in 2005
March 31, 2008, 14:31

share your story when you feel ready daycap……no pressure.

Did you write the poem yourself or is it one that you found that describes what you have gone through.

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